You're welcome! This was an experiment with language, and I came awfully close to chickening out and making it something more respectable - like third person. But Slanted Light helped a lot in sorting out the beginning where I'd managed to muck up my tenses rather spectacularly, and couldn't quite figure out how to dig myself out of that hole.

Needed my hand held on this one, basically. So I'm really proud of how it's turned out!

And I do love a gleeful Bodie, too. ;-)