msmoat.livejournal.com ([identity profile] msmoat.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2006-12-10 02:38 pm (UTC)

Ooh, I like thinking of this as a sequel to your "Present Company"--it fits very nicely. They are making progress! *g* This is nice. I like the way we get glimpses of Bodie's reactions--his clipped tone as he reports in, the glee, the simple act of sitting by the bed all night...lovely. This definitely needs a sequel, though! Perhaps the next challenge...? ;-)

Thanks!

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