The Natural Order of Things was the first Pros fic I ever wrote. The personal challenge for me in that one was to write an explicit sex scene without ever mentioning actual naughty bits by name.
In this one... I don't know if you noticed, but there was no actual dialogue - at least none in quotes. That's how I got around the, "They won't talk!" block. I didn't let them! ;-)
I'm not sure how a sequel would go, though... Present Company was third person present tense. Of Christmas Present was second person present tense. I suppose if I wrote another one it would logically have to be first person present tense, wouldn't it? Or else I'd skip back to third person present tense from Bodie's POV and make it a one-two pattern.
no subject
In this one... I don't know if you noticed, but there was no actual dialogue - at least none in quotes. That's how I got around the, "They won't talk!" block. I didn't let them! ;-)
I'm not sure how a sequel would go, though... Present Company was third person present tense. Of Christmas Present was second person present tense. I suppose if I wrote another one it would logically have to be first person present tense, wouldn't it? Or else I'd skip back to third person present tense from Bodie's POV and make it a one-two pattern.
Oi, my head hurts!