Oh thanks! Hee – coming out of the closet – d’you know I didn’t even think of that *g*

Cheers for letting me know the bits that worked best for you – when I wrote that raid scene, I was still unsure which way it was going to go (Ray shooter or victim) so maybe that contributed to the tension!

Glad it had two satisfying conclusions for you and that you enjoyed it. Cheers! And sneaking in a quick ‘I think your vids are fab’ comment as well!

MB x