battening it down in front of the others
Yeah, you can see him doing that on the show. Like in "Fugitive" when he's with Cowley and discussing Bodie's situation. But when he's with Bodie--like in "Klansman" or "Black Out", he shows his worry. I like that. *g*

I'm glad the dialogue works for you! That line you quoted from Bodie--the "Ah, now..." I can hear him there so clearly. I'm glad you can, too.

Thanks!