ext_21585 ([identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2006-12-15 03:33 pm (UTC)

Both of these were just wonderful. I loved, loved, loved the breathless pace to the dialogue in the first one. The most wonderful, snappy banter - and the references - The Sound of music, Slade, Gary Glitter. I loved the grumbling Doyle that you worte, he had me chuckling constantly!

And I'll echo what everyone says about No Candle. Wistful, melancholy, but that lovely note of hope and cheer, too. And all wonderfully understated in the brief exchange at the end.


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