ext_17731 ([identity profile] ancastar.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2006-12-18 06:47 pm (UTC)

An action oriented Christmas story--gotta love that! I thought you balanced character and plot really well with this one. I was hanging on your every word. You also did a nice job describing the countryside and the cold. I really felt like I was there. *Ray-dar*! ::snerk:: Good stuff. Thanks so much.

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