He considered discarding the segment with Doyle's fingerprint, but, deciding it might be as much of Doyle as he could ever hope to get into his mouth, devoured it with private satisfaction.

I shouldn´t start quoting, maybe cut out the sentences that..nah, this story is soooo perfect!
Wonderful how you captured the moods and the way they communicate! Hilarious the IOU from Marge.
Even more hilarious how Ray jumps to conclusions.
How I love this! Thanks for sharing!