http://constant-muse.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] constant-muse.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2009-12-19 12:45 pm (UTC)

“This is to thank you for mending the machine. Mum says there’s no rush to return the dish.” I love the spare way you brought that in, and that goes for the whole fic, acutely detailed where needed, with no padding, so the reader can form their own images.

And I do love 'can do anything' lads, from repairing a washing machine to helping with History homework, in between saving the great British public in their own inimitable way.

Susan is interesting, well, enigmatic. Where is their money coming from?? Hope there will be a part 2!

And great use of prompt!

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