ext_33663 ([identity profile] crimson-37.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2006-12-22 08:10 am (UTC)

I realy enjoyed this. What a wondeful insight into their ealier days. I have to say my favourite part was them both hovering close over the radio, all excited at a job well done, waiting for the pat on the head and some long awaited praise from the Cow. I could so feel their almost 'smug' anticipation of their reward and picture the wide eyed expressions on their young faces held close saying 'here it comes, we're clever little boys' lol. Funny how life doesn't always go the way you forsee it...lol
I loved the moment they shared as the sun set too, so serene.

The ending was full of action of every sort, ;) and kept me on the edge of my seat throughout.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful story. :)


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