Oh, I love it. Each of the different approaches is just so fun (well, maybe 'fun' isn't quite the right word for #2, but it definitely *speaks* to something). I think my favourite is the art gallery one, with Bodie noticing Doyle's interest and then surprising him by pouncing.

Doyle looked over to see Ann watching them. He knew the picture they must make, Bodie plastered up against his back and whispering in his ear, the heat in his face.

Perfectly visible, since they do that in canon all the time!

Hey, typo: Nerves still tingling, he carried the glass over to one of the painting,

Anyway... Loved it, and I'm so glad you're writing Pros.