What a wonderful story! I love this, beautiful, soooooo real. I started reading as a "missing scene" story of a disturbing and very interesting episode: escape, fear, hesitation, nervous (sexual?) tension... Perfect. And then, very slowly, delicately, your story became so truthful, so right; a completely new universe. Beautifully written. Many lovely moments, already commented. (*Doyle’s shout was a thing of beauty and a thing of danger* Oh please... these words are Poetry. I don't know why but this line is... is Ray Doyle!) Thank you very much for this.
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I started reading as a "missing scene" story of a disturbing and very interesting episode: escape, fear, hesitation, nervous (sexual?) tension... Perfect. And then, very slowly, delicately, your story became so truthful, so right; a completely new universe.
Beautifully written. Many lovely moments, already commented. (*Doyle’s shout was a thing of beauty and a thing of danger* Oh please... these words are Poetry. I don't know why but this line is... is Ray Doyle!)
Thank you very much for this.