Bodie just wanted to go back to sleep. He couldn't help but think he stood a better chance of that staying in his own flat, near his own couch and bed, than strolling down some dreamscape street on his way to Doyle's.
I love it - love the gentle comedy that just slips calmly through the story, just like the eps, just like them...

And oh, Bodie watching Doyle - and I do agree, Doyle just getting on with it, even though his heart is breaking... well he would wouldn't he... Makes it so much more affecting when it's subtle like that...

(And sorry, I keep interupting your reading too... *g* Well if you will post in so many ever-so-effective parts! Which is a great touch, of course, whether you planned it or not it really works well. Keeps us desperate for the next bit. *realises she's rabbiting on when she could be reading the next bit - gaaah!)