For me, there are so many things in this story that don't work. First off, Cowley being so nasty and evil. I don't see it. Another is Cowley wanting Bodie so badly he turns into this monster. I can't wrap my brain around that and Bodie is so far OCC. But hey, whatever floats people's boats. If you like horrible stories, try Sunshine by Castalia. Not horrible in a writing standpoint because the writing is fine, but horrible in an ending and how the characters act standpoint. *shudders*

I read for enjoyment and stories like this leave me with bad dreams. I'll pass, thank you very much. It's not fun.