ext_7598 ([identity profile] justacat.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2007-01-04 04:11 pm (UTC)

You already know how much I love this... Each section ending with Ray resolving so earnestly that this is it, *no more sex with Bodie,* and then, next paragraph - Ray getting out of bed with Bodie. Oops! Sabotaged at every turn, by himself, *and*, we learn later, Bodie, too! Like Gilda Elise said, what did Doyle expect, fighting the inevitable?

So many great lines - I just love this:

The relationship he had with Bodie was all he wanted, so why complicate it? They were the best in CI5, attuned to one another. He liked being with Bodie—going to the pub, watching a game, double-dating. Sucking his cock. Okay, he’d maybe gone a little overboard there.

Huh, do you think?! I love the whole last exchange, and I also love Bodie - "We are having a talk, Ray." So many things I love, in fact! This makes me very happy! :-)

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