ext_117688 ([identity profile] windrain10.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2007-01-05 03:50 am (UTC)

This was really good. I liked the fact that it seemed that Doyle felt he was dealing with this, working thru this situation w/ Bodie on his own, alone, when Bodie had been keeping an eye on him thruout, and finally telling him, we have to talk. IOW, we have to resolve this. I'm hardly an expert on the lads, but it seemed to me that they were both written in character. I especially could visualize Doyle in each scene, almost as if I were watching the story and not reading it.

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