Well, if that's what you want, then you need to get in there and post the next 200 words, establishing firmly that either...
1. Ray got knocked over the head harder than we think, and is suffering from a subdermal hematoma, and will shortly collapse into a drooling, twitching heap.
2. Or, Bodie's night vision is pleasant side effect of what is shortly going to be a very unpleasant bout of... something nasty. The symptoms of which could resemble the flu? Tetanus? Rabies?
3. OR, one side effect of the virus is insanity, and Bodie only *thinks* he can see clearly and that he's headed back upstairs. Actually, he's leading them down a pitch black hallway, further into the bowels of the building.
Um..., anything else? Anyway, if you don't want were-Bodie, then get in there and beat that particular plot bunny to death! ;-)
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1. Ray got knocked over the head harder than we think, and is suffering from a subdermal hematoma, and will shortly collapse into a drooling, twitching heap.
2. Or, Bodie's night vision is pleasant side effect of what is shortly going to be a very unpleasant bout of... something nasty. The symptoms of which could resemble the flu? Tetanus? Rabies?
3. OR, one side effect of the virus is insanity, and Bodie only *thinks* he can see clearly and that he's headed back upstairs. Actually, he's leading them down a pitch black hallway, further into the bowels of the building.
Um..., anything else? Anyway, if you don't want were-Bodie, then get in there and beat that particular plot bunny to death! ;-)
Good luck!