I enjoyed that - thank you! The whole story moved along very well and the voices were good. The moment when Doyle's sliding into unconsciousness and he's thinking about Bodie's mouth and arse is fun. And Doyle's thoughts about Bodie's tongue at the end were wonderfully sinful *wg*.

“Enough to knock out an elephant,” said Bodie, his expression dark. “Almost knocked you out permanently.”
I was concerned about the tranquiliser dart too - there's a point of no return with these things. Maybe Bodie was exaggerating somewhat about the elephant-sized dose (worried about Ray, of course).