Oh! You really ARE throwing rocks at them, aren't you? Well done!
Feverish Bodie, and snakebit Doyle - mmm... And wonderfully rich description, to boot. I like the picture of the mountain and jungle you've painted. I also like the gradual building of trust between the two of them, even with Bodie's continuing (and well founded) distrust of his companion. It also seems like RD's starting to act a little more independently, which is likely to be lucky for Bodie.
My favorite bit?
"In it, the morning sun rose, along with a black-shouldered kite who soared an hour or more on a thermal without once stroking his widespread wings. Confused with the image of the grand raptor's flight was a view of RD, the brilliant light beams stroking his zephyr-stirred curls."
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Feverish Bodie, and snakebit Doyle - mmm... And wonderfully rich description, to boot. I like the picture of the mountain and jungle you've painted. I also like the gradual building of trust between the two of them, even with Bodie's continuing (and well founded) distrust of his companion. It also seems like RD's starting to act a little more independently, which is likely to be lucky for Bodie.
My favorite bit?
"In it, the morning sun rose, along with a black-shouldered kite who soared an hour or more on a thermal without once stroking his widespread wings. Confused with the image of the grand raptor's flight was a view of RD, the brilliant light beams stroking his zephyr-stirred curls."
I like that image!