msmoat.livejournal.com ([identity profile] msmoat.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2007-03-18 02:36 pm (UTC)

Gluttony! We all know that one--how many Pros stories can we read and still want more, more more? *g* I like Doyle's olive branch--and how it doesn't work. And his strategy to get Bodie to his flat, that only works when there is a thaw (brought on by humor and shared danger--typical!) And, most importantly, that the "inordinate desire" is mutual, and all-important. I like Doyle realizing he didn't react to Esther moving close to him in the same way as he did with Bodie. And I like how Bodie can't stay away from Doyle, and realizes what a prat he's been. And when Doyle raises the stakes, Bodie matches him. Mutual is good. *g* Thank you!

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