This was lovely. I thought you wove in the bits from Takeaway seamlessly and your take on gluttony was inspired.

One of the things I like best with your writing is the warmth you bring to it. Even when the lads aren't seeing eye to eye, even when one or the other of them is a prat, I still feel for them.

I adored the moment when Doyle realizes Bodie dressed up for him. And his retort to Bodie's teasing, "You snore, sunshine."

"You won't notice."

Bloody brilliant. Thanks!