ext_8846 ([identity profile] gilda-elise.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2007-03-25 05:01 pm (UTC)

What a great story! I liked the switch made from Pt 1 to 2, what the world sees, through Holly's eyes, and what's theirs alone. But even more, the reason for Bodie's unrest wasn't the obvious yet it worked so well. Really liked that, too.
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