Ah, nice start to the challenge season! As others have mentioned, this had a nice, tense air to it (and hot *g*), where you're wondering how much Doyle understood about Bodie and about himself. Hmmm... Definitely fertile ground for a sequel!

Thank you! (I must admit, however, reading it at work--and finishing just as people came into my office for a meeting--wasn't the brightest idea I ever had. Who knew, though?? *g*)