I really liked your narrator. She was an absolutely convincing sixteen year old, with that kind of world-weary naivete that teens get, and I really liked her clumsy attempts at cozying up to Doyle. What I wouldn't have given to have attended that party! (In retrospect, of course, knowing that all would end well, and not as the six year old I actually was back in '77... ;-))
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I really liked your narrator. She was an absolutely convincing sixteen year old, with that kind of world-weary naivete that teens get, and I really liked her clumsy attempts at cozying up to Doyle. What I wouldn't have given to have attended that party! (In retrospect, of course, knowing that all would end well, and not as the six year old I actually was back in '77... ;-))
Very enjoyable story. Thanks!