Oh, this brought all my UK days around that time rushing back!! Brilliant evokation of the times. And I agree with Rebel, you got that bolshy, awkward teenager's voice down perfectly, a totally convincing narrator. I loved her observations of Curly and Butch. And Doyle's responses to her were vividly canon - heard MS say every word.

"It'll make my partner jealous." He nodded in Butch's direction, his mouth set in a grin my gran would've called "devilish." "He's the only one allowed to give me lemon squash."

Tee-hee!

Thanks for this, absolutely lovely.