ext_77597 ([identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2007-06-20 10:06 pm (UTC)

Yay, another great fic! It's wonderful - I love it. You're so damn good at creating atmosphere. It was so real, I was actually there, feeling what Doyle felt, having that tense feeling all the time. It gave me goosebumps, even after I knew that Bodie was ok. Hell, I almost felt the pain of both of them. And it was so typical Bodie to just run off without his gear. Stupid bastard. But at least he learned his lesson about trust, or so I hope. And the ending is just perfect. So hot and wild and so alive and afterwards the letting go, relaxing, being content, just being together. And Bodie promising the kid a ride on the Jubilee bus - he isn't such a bad guy after all, right?

I really do envy you for your great writing skills. Thanks for a wonderful good night story. Will go to bed now with the image of the lads in the shower in my head *G*

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