Yay! Wonderful mix of action and sex and hurt/comfort and anxiety and relief and everything I could ever want in a story. I love it!
I especially liked how you had everything happening over the course of a single - very tumultuous - day. There were other things I enjoyed, too, including the way you depicted Ray's inner turmoil, anger and fear all mixed up together.
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I especially liked how you had everything happening over the course of a single - very tumultuous - day. There were other things I enjoyed, too, including the way you depicted Ray's inner turmoil, anger and fear all mixed up together.
Very enjoyable read! Thanks! :-)