ext_42292 ([identity profile] myrebelcat.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2007-06-20 10:08 pm (UTC)

Yay! Wonderful mix of action and sex and hurt/comfort and anxiety and relief and everything I could ever want in a story. I love it!

I especially liked how you had everything happening over the course of a single - very tumultuous - day. There were other things I enjoyed, too, including the way you depicted Ray's inner turmoil, anger and fear all mixed up together.

Very enjoyable read! Thanks! :-)

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