TFI Friday 13th *g* Loved the way this rattled along, it has a great balance and rhythm and was so fun to read. Oh and Bodie yearning for a father like Cowley ... *sniffle* ... and the appearance of Brendan when least expected. Brilliant!

Then again, there was a point at which caring became nagging. That really made me laugh. I liked the way you didn't let Bodie quite take his thought processes to their logical conclusion but how he was finally getting the idea by the end!