Wonderful! I always love a protective Bodie, and he's in fine form here. The image of Bodie catching a falling Doyle is perfect.

myrebelcat is right that there are so many great lines. Too many to quote. And your dialogue is so sharp. They say so much, but without directly saying anything.

And I love the nurse riding herd over the two of them. She's going to have her hands full.

Lovely.