Very good story - love the mix of action and emotion.
Just one thing re: football. I've spotted an anachronism that's worth pointing out for future reference for all writers. Some teams are now playing in stadiums/grounds that didn't exist in the days of The Pros. Derby Country is a case in point: they played at The Baseball Ground before moving to Pride Park in 1997.
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Just one thing re: football. I've spotted an anachronism that's worth pointing out for future reference for all writers. Some teams are now playing in stadiums/grounds that didn't exist in the days of The Pros. Derby Country is a case in point: they played at The Baseball Ground before moving to Pride Park in 1997.