Now there's a reaction I hardly dared hope for - I'm so glad you think it had some hotness, especially as this was my First Ever Ever Ever attempt at a sex scene and I was rather apprehensive about it! (I was fortunate to get some brilliant advice about that, btw, which helped immensely - Doyle was a bit too passive in my first draft, which is so not him). Ooh, happy now! Thank you!
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