msmoat.livejournal.com ([identity profile] msmoat.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2006-10-31 02:16 pm (UTC)

At last! A story to go with the illustration! *g* I really liked how you used the expression on Doyle's face in the illustration and fit it in with the story. And how Bodie taking a chance, being vulnerable, banished that expression. That's lovely.

Also lovely is the image of Bodie and Doyle in costume *g* Oh, and Bodie being stunned and then grabbing Doyle's wrist and dragging him out of the party and into the bedroom. Ahem. Yes!

I also really liked Doyle looking shifty and asking for Bodie to pinch some poetry. *g*

Thank you! This was very enjoyable!

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