ext_105631 ([identity profile] melanieathene.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj2007-09-21 04:08 pm
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Drabble - Under the Weather


First time posting here... I was lured in by the drabble challenge. :)



“Told you it was too cold to be prancing about without a jacket, didn't I, mate?”

Bodie sneezed in reply.

“Now here we are, shut in on a gorgeous day.” Doyle wistfully peered out the window. “What am I going to do with you?” he sighed.

“Never said you had to stay with me, did I?” Bodie coughed.

“No place I'd rather be,” Doyle admitted quietly, climbing back into bed and embracing his shivering partner.

Snuffling softly, Bodie buried his nose in Doyle's curls and dreamed of falling leaves, their russet glory the exact same colour as his lover's hair.

[identity profile] myrebelcat.livejournal.com 2007-09-21 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, lovely little drabble, especially for fall! And I love your sick, pathetic Bodie. :-) He's lucky he's got his Doyle.
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[identity profile] snailbones.livejournal.com 2007-09-21 07:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I love your snuffling Bodie. Lovely drabble, thanks :~)

[identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com 2007-09-21 07:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor sick Bodie. I loved the bit of h/c. Thanks!

[identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com 2007-09-21 07:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwww, that's such a cute drabble! Men are like babies when sick, tzk. Love the part with the falling leaves and Doyle's hair.

[identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com 2007-09-21 08:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, I do like a sick, snuffly Bodie - thanks for this.

[identity profile] moth2fic.livejournal.com 2007-09-21 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
That's perfect for the autumn equinox!! I hope Doyle doesn't catch Bodie's cold...

[identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com 2007-09-21 10:38 pm (UTC)(link)
This is so sweet (not mushy-sweet, but so gentle and such a light touch) - Doyle wants to be out, but not if it means leaving Bodie behind. And love the autumn leaves!

[identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com 2007-09-21 10:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh nice... I can definitely go with snuggling lads when the leaves are turning... *g* Thank you! (And glad we lured you!)

[identity profile] empty-mirrors.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 11:04 am (UTC)(link)
Awwwww

[identity profile] nakeisha.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 11:27 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, lovely.

[identity profile] crimson-37.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 12:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, sacrifices. What they wouldn't give up for the other. And now they're all snuggled up. *sighs*
Lovely!

Thanks so much for sharing this with us. :)

[identity profile] przed.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 04:06 pm (UTC)(link)
I can never resist a sick lads story, and this is a good 'un.

[identity profile] magnifica7.livejournal.com 2008-01-14 12:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent medicine! :)