msmoat.livejournal.com ([identity profile] msmoat.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2006-11-01 01:45 pm (UTC)

Cool use of the video! Thank you for this. I liked the atmosphere, and I liked this bit especially: Glancing over at his partner, Doyle took in the pout, rolled his eyes, then pushed against the other man's shoulder. Naturally, Bodie pushed back and a bit of a scuffle took place, ending up with Doyle pinning Bodie to one rugged wall. The two looked at each other in the gloom, all merriment gone in an instant. A moment, then two, riding the edge of the tension between them.

I can see that happening very easily. *g*

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