Drabble Challenge

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

I don't think I've ever done a drabble before, so be warned. Not beta'd except by me.

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"Did you think I wouldn't notice?"

Doyle barely had time to ask, "Notice what?" before he was forcefully turned and pressed up against the inside of his front door. He wiggled, but the body moulded to his was unrelenting.

"That fucking patch. All day long, you waggled it in my face. It was like a bloody bull's eye. Every time I looked, it was all I could see, and it called to me all sodding day!"

"I didn't-"

"Don't lie to me," Bodie growled as he made his move.

The sound of popping thread made them both hold their breaths.

Comments

[heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com]

That patch has a lot to answer for! (not least a thousand fantasies on Bodie's part, I'm sure). Popping thread, the sound of promise ....
All of a sudden it's deliciously warm in here!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Ha! Yes, that patch... *g* And just yeay for new drabblers!

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I'm warm as well.

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

What was he thinking with that? Might as well have painted the black circles on it. *bad kat*

[probodie.livejournal.com]

Oh lovely - I can just imagine that patch popping off - yummy. Hope you do more :D

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading!

[myrebelcat.livejournal.com]

Oh... just a tad dark, eh? ;-) I like this! I like where it's going, and I love the detail and promise of the last line.

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Love the threat/promise of the last line and this is a great idea to build a hundred words around - that patch has a lot to answer for.*g*

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Oh, I can sooo feel with Bodie. This bloody thing drove me nuts too. Glad he finally did something about it *G* Very sexy for such a short piece!

[bistokids.livejournal.com]

This is canon. Gotta be. There's just no way that patch wasn't followed up on! Last line is delicious!

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Thanks, Rebel. It's one of those down and dirty tales.

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Of course it it's canon. *beg* Bodie lost the phone number; that girl turned Doyle down; the lads went home together. End of story. Er, well, not really. Thanks for commenting.

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad the emotions were there for you.

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Doesn't it though? Thanks, Sheila.

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

LOL. It's hypnotising, that patch. I quite see Bodie's point.

[nakeisha.livejournal.com]

*Smiles*

Nicely done.

[solosundance.livejournal.com]

see this is why I love drabbles ... sound effects are just so much more *effective* *g*

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I can as well.

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Glad it made you smile.

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

LOL! I hadn't thought about that, but you're right! I love drabbles as well. Tasty little bites, aren't they?

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

So that's why we never saw those jeans again. LOL

I don't blame Bodie. Poor man must have been taken to his limit. But then I wonder if Doyle is as aware of how much he waves that butt in front of his partner as we are all are. Some people just don't realise they are doing it. LOL

Brilliant this. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing this with us. :)

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

You are very welcome. I enjoyed myself trying to figure out which 100 words to use! It's harder than it looks.

And yes, those jeans ended up on the kitchen floor, in tatters, covered with olive oil. *snicker*

[moth2fic.livejournal.com]

*giggles*
Lovely!

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

those jeans ended up on the kitchen floor, in tatters, covered with olive oil. *snicker*

BWAHAHAHAH! I just bet they did...lol

I know what you mean about it being so much harder than it looks, this drabbling.

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Well, Bodie did use lube, after all.