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Drabble - Hairdryer

He told himself that he wouldn't really do it. That this was Bodie's bag, not his. But that's kind of the point. He's doing this for Bodie, to find Bodie, and in this situation, is there anything he wouldn't actually do?

"Where is he?" he asks again.

Cahill's gaze flicks between Doyle's face and the hairdryer poised less than an inch above the water. Sweat sheens on his top lip, from fear or heat from the bath, Doyle doesn't know which, or care. He just wants to know. And he knows that he will do anything - anything - to find out.

[identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 08:45 am (UTC)(link)
Whoa, that's the Doyle I love! Bad tempered and ready to kill. Bodie's on hell of a lucky chap to have a mate like that. Great drabble, love it.

[identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 08:46 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my - sends shivers down my spine this one... I love it, it's the edge isn't it - where will the lads go for each other, how far... Oh, this is good... Thank you!

[identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 09:01 am (UTC)(link)
Gorgeous dark edge to Doyle in this, love him when he's all fired up and ready to do anything to save Bodie.

[identity profile] miwahni.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 09:08 am (UTC)(link)
Chilling! But yeah, I can see this.
ext_112784: (Doyle)

[identity profile] angel-ci5.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 10:01 am (UTC)(link)
Very powerful, I love it, thank you!

[identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 10:10 am (UTC)(link)
I liked this a lot and would love to see more of it. Thanks!

[identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 10:51 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, yes. Will he or won't he? Good drabble, full of tension. Thank you.

[identity profile] solosundance.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 11:15 am (UTC)(link)
oh my giddy aunt, *tough* Raymond ... love it, thank you!

[identity profile] nakeisha.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 11:20 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, very tense and gripping.

[identity profile] myrebelcat.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 11:41 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah! I like this - dark and gritty. Doyle's going to get his answers, you just know it. Imaginative use of the prompt, too!

[identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 11:45 am (UTC)(link)
Yup, he'd definitely kill for Bodie. And vice versa.

[identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 12:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I think you're absolutely right, Doyle might threaten but would never actually do anything like this - unless Bodie's life were at stake. Then all bets are off; he would do anything, even something normally out of character, to save Bodie. Chilling and beautifully done - especially as it suggests Doyle may only just now be finding that out about himself .... thank you for this; it's excellent!

[identity profile] magenta-blue.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 05:27 pm (UTC)(link)
I have a feeling Doyle found out exactly what he needed pretty quick! Good use of your prompt word... I actually thought of O Yardley's Injured Innocents and that Doyle was going to actually get his hair cut at first!

[identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 07:39 pm (UTC)(link)
My original boys. Aren't they sweet?

[identity profile] crimson-37.livejournal.com 2007-09-23 12:52 am (UTC)(link)
Oh I love it when the Doyle darkside is revealed. And so true what wouldn't he do for his man.

This is truly brilliant.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

[identity profile] moth2fic.livejournal.com 2007-09-24 09:33 am (UTC)(link)
*needs entire episode....*