ext_33663 ([identity profile] crimson-37.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2007-09-23 03:20 pm (UTC)

Oh a lovely little look into the beginning of something great. I could picture the whole thing, but that last line with Doyle laughing down at him - and in my imagination Bodie's face slowly breaking into a smile - was perfect.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

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