ext_239101 ([identity profile] billiephillips.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2007-10-15 05:31 pm (UTC)

The Second Coming

This is wonderful -- I can't help thinking (and giggling) about the poem's title in light of your story. This is so much like that, layers upon layers meaning, except in this case, I am sure that the center will hold, that they will hold.

I have to agree with the person who cited the "I don't trust *that*" line; it's perfect.

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