I loved this! What a great read - the thoughts Bodie had were exactly how I imagine an LSD trip to be, and this line:

Bodie wondered if he’d somehow died without noticing and ended up in hell, doomed to an eternity of sitting on Doyle’s sofa watching the walls melt. With a hard on.

really made me laugh out loud, something that is quite rare for me in fiction! And the snippets Doyle was reading - oh, it was all done so skillfully. What a treat, thanks!