ext_8961 ([identity profile] przed.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2007-10-22 12:25 am (UTC)

What a wonderful story. I love the descriptions of Bodie on LSD, managed to be funny and unsettling all at once. This line made me giggle:

He was hissing something about red armies and fractions.

The whole story's full of little unexpected, wonderful details like that.

And you're Doyle's great too. Worried and irritated and getting unexpectedly turned on by Bodie but too noble to do anything about it.

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