Hi, Izzie! Welcome (from one relative newbie to another). I knew I would predisposed to like you, as your screen name is the same as that of my most fav pet of all time, the late lamented Isabella. *sniff* But must confess I really liked the story as well. I thought you captured B & D's voices quite well and liked how you wrote the action sections of your story (Ray wishing he could zip through the thick traffic, trailing the bomb through the open field, etc.). I hope you share with us many stories to come. Thanks!