Welcome to LJ, Izzie! It was very frustrating yesterday when LJ seemed to be down for quite a long time but today is making up for it! Oh, what a fun Bonfire collection this is turning out to be. I enjoyed this story. Like myrebelcat, I giggled at the reference to "Bodie's chocolate-centred mind" and liked the two of them discovering how much they need each other.
Hope to hear more from you!