ext_55350 ([identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2007-10-21 12:36 pm (UTC)

That was absolutely wonderful. I liked the entire setup: Bodie's pain over Doyle's death, then his bit of hopefulness; the way all the agents knew and understood; Doyle's "rescue"; and finally, their getting it straight You wove a tale that dragged me in immediately and kept me until the final line. Thank you!

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