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krisser ([identity profile] krisserci5.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2007-10-29 03:53 am (UTC)

What I love most was how you captured Bodie's inner thoughts when Cowley ordered him to go in by the book. How important Doyle is to Bodie is conveyed so eloquently without actually stating it. I so enjoyed the story.
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