ext_7880 ([identity profile] kiwisue.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2006-11-05 11:27 am (UTC)

Thanks for your comments, I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. And I have to credit my lovely beta for a couple of changes to what I'd written that enabled Doyle's concern to come through more clearly.

And a doozy of a last line, too!
Hee! Can't have a Bodie/Doyle story without an explosion or two *g*

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