Oh, yes, very tense and pulled me right along with it. I, too, had wanted to know what happened after Gods and Goddesses, so this is very welcome.
I liked this whole paragraph particularly -
"Then there was a shimmer of white across his eyes. He blinked, thinking it was an after-effect of O'Neill's shot. What came after was weird, unreal. The darkness did not lessen yet somehow it seemed to splinter into layers, black on black, forming strangely overlapping yet recognisable shapes. He could tell where Bodie stood, sable against a pitch-dark wall, gun in hand, muzzle lifted as he searched the darkness."
lovely descriptive writing to create a visual effect - really conjured up pictures in my mind.