ext_77601 ([identity profile] izzie7.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2006-11-05 05:21 pm (UTC)

Like msmoat, this was two new stories for me. Either works well alone, but together they complement each other beautifully. You moved this story along with terrific pace, and a hint of claustrophobia that underlines the plot to great effect. I really liked:

"You'll break the rule of the Underworld."

"What's that?"

"Don't look back."

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