It is never too late to send comments. *g* (As I keep telling myself regarding some of the stories I'm still meaning to get back to read!) And, well, smut is and integral part of their relationship development. Good point! *g* I think, sometimes with sex scenes, it's too easy to go kind of...generic. I mean there are only so many ways to describe the actions and the feelings. If we changed the names, would the scenes be the same in every fandom? (Well, at least the ones where you've got two fairly normal humans. *g*) I don't know. But I think what I was trying to capture here was the way Bodie and Doyle typically interact with each other and put it right there with them during sex. And it was both harder and easier than I expected. Hmm.

At any rate, sorry to ponder there with your comment! Thank you for posting!