ext_61112 ([identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2007-11-08 10:38 pm (UTC)

I'm late too, but just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this - and yes, "anything you can do I can do better" even during sex - you can just feel it! And I really love how you manage to make this so revealing of their relationship, Bodie's realisation that this is so much more than casual games, the serious declaration - yet all achieved without breaking the way the banter, the teasing style of exchange works for them. Lovely!

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