Good sequel! The beginning drew me right in with, "He was in trouble." And in lots of different ways, apparently!
I'm often leery of the whole sex-while-injured thing, but I like the way you handled it here - "the pain adding to his arousal". Under the circumstances, I think it works.
I particularly liked the end, with the comment about exorcism bringing it back to the supernatural feel of "Fire". Oh, but the whole bit where Bodie thought maybe Doyle had been shot was good too... Okay, I liked the whole thing. :-)